Sunday, March 31, 2013

Forbidden Crush Finale

How will things between Darren and Jamie turn out? Will it end up just being a one night fling, or will Jamie actually leave Laurie? Read on to find out!

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Forbidden Crush, Finale

By Samantha Kay


Darren had Jamie in his arms as they lay in bed together. They’d drifted off to sleep after their night of passion.

 As Darren’s eyes flickered open, to see Jamie’s head resting on his chest, he smiled to himself. His heart fluttered, the movement ricocheting even into his throat.

He exhaled deeply as he tightened his hold of Jamie, his arm wrapped around his smooth shoulders.

 Darren felt Jamie begin to shuffle about slightly. 

As Jamie began to wake up he brought his leg up and laid it across Darren’s, which made his dick press up into Darren’s side. Jamie then began nuzzling his nose into Darren’s neck.

 ”Morning gorgeous.” Darren murmured in Jamie’s ear. “You ok?”

 ”Yeah.” Jamie croaked in his morning voice, sliding his hand onto Darren’s chest. “Sore though.” He chuckled softly.

 ”Ha, yeah, sorry about that.” Darren laughed, despite his cheeks suddenly flooding with heat. 

 Jamie ever so softly kissed Darren’s neck, relishing in the sensation of the smooth flesh against his dry lips.

”Mmm.” Darren mumbled, a tingle jerking into his cock. 

”You smell so good.” Jamie whispered, slowly letting his hand glide down Darren’s stomach and slipping under the duvet. He bypassed where Darren had hoped he was going, instead sweeping across and grabbing at Darren’s hip. 

”Fuck.” Darren gasped quietly, his back arching for a second as though he could push his dick into Jamie’s hand.

Darren then took a deep breath, trying to empty his mind of fleeting images of making love to Jamie again.

”We need to talk Jamie. Before we do anything else.” Darren sighed.

”I know.” Jamie exhaled heavily. “But this just feels so nice.”

”Really does, doesn’t it.” Darren smiled inwardly, leaning his head into Jamie’s.


Jamie stood at the gate, his gaze slowly creeping up the path to the red front door.

Tilting his head back as he rolled his shoulders, he took a long, deep breath.

Hell, here goes. 

I can’t believe I’m actually doing this…

 Slowly walking up to the door, his palms were beginning to moisten. Jamie took his keys from his pocket, the bundle of clanging metal slipping from his fingers onto the floor.

”Shit.” He muttered, his chest tightening as he crouched down to pick them up. Jamie hesitated as the key neared the hole, stopping for a moment to look up at the door.

I don’t want to break your heart. I wish you didn’t love me Laurie. Or I wished I loved you like I used to…

 Closing his eyes while taking another deep breath, Jamie finally unlocked the door, carefully pushing it open as though not to wake a sleeping baby.

The silence he was greeted with in the house was like a sharp knife to the stomach.

Where is she? Should I even bother to hang my jacket up? Probably not. There’s a good chance she’s just going to shove you back out the door once you’ve told her it’s over.

Jamie eyes suddenly moistened, the sharp pain making its way to his heart.

We’ve built a life together. How can I throw it all away like this? We’ve been through so much. School, college, university. Laurie was also there when my Dad passed, when my Mum turned to the bottle, when a friend was put into a coma after a car accident.

She doesn’t deserve to have her heart broken…

 Jamie couldn’t hear any movement, and as he walked down the hallway he checked the time on his watch.

It’s only 10.30am, she should be home? I called in sick for this. Though maybe I should have just waited until tonight.

 ”Laurie?” Jamie stifled out, finding his throat to feel oddly sore and achy. 

 More silence was his reply. So he decided to check upstairs. 

He felt grateful for not having the kind of stairway where every footstep caused a creepy creaking noise to fill the house. 

Jamie headed towards the bedroom first.

Maybe she’s laid on the bed reading? 

 Jamie’s insides did a painful flip as he clutched the doorknob and pushed the door open.

”Fuck!” Jamie gasped.  

He nearly buckled at the sensation of needles stabbing into every inch of his skin, one reaching as far as his pounding heart. His mouth fell open, though no air could pass through his tight throat and crushed lungs.

”I…I…I can’t…” Jamie stammered, before turning and stumbling back out into the hallway.

”Jamie!” Laurie’s voice screeched, as she hurriedly grabbed a t-shirt off the floor, pulling it on over her matted hair. 

Jamie stood outside the bedroom, frozen and gawping at the window at the end of the hallway, tree branches rattling against the glass.

”I’m sorry! I’m so sorry! Please, Jamie!“ She was weeping already, though her make-up was already smeared; lipstick dragged away from her mouth.

”It doesn’t matter.” Jamie whispered inwardly. A tingling feeling was still throbbing through his body, as he turned around to face Laurie.

She was wearing the t-shirt that clearly belonged to the man she’d just been caught with.

That’s a bit of a slap to the face.

”How did it come to this Laurie?” A tear escaped Jamie’s eye, as he studied the woman before him. How did we end up cheating on each other? We used to be amazing together.

”I’m sorry Jamie. It didn’t mean anything, I swear!” Laurie wept, her hands clutching at Jamie’s arms, shaking him a little as she trembled with desperation.

Jamie brought his hands up to hold Laurie’s face, looking into her deep blue eyes as he swallowed hard.

”We’re over Laurie.” Jamie managed to say calmly, in a deep steady tone. “I’ve been cheating too.”

Laurie literally sucked in a breath, her eyes widening as she stared hard at Jamie.

”You bastard…” She muttered with a sharp edge to her voice.

As Laurie remained rigid with shock and continued to glare, Jamie took his hands away and slowly turned to walk away. He only got to the stairs when a flame combusted inside Laurie.

”Who is she!” She screamed, though her anger had deepened what was usually a high-pitched noise. “Tell me! What slut have you been fucking Jamie!” 

Jamie’s heart plummeted. A lump crushed his voice box, and he picked up the pace in leaving the house.

”Jamie! Get back here, now!” The volume pierced his ears.

She needs to calm down before we can talk about all this.

I need to leave her alone for a bit…

”I’m…I’m going out for a bit. We’ll discuss this later.” Jamie stammered, his voice shaky. He tripped over a pair of Laurie’s sandals as he neared the door to leave.

”Please, please don’t go.” The anger had been abruptly stripped away, leaving a quivering teary influence.

Jamie stopped in his tracks, just before his hand made it to the door handle.

Oh Laurie, please don’t make this any harder then it already is…

”I’m sorry.” Jamie whispered. “But it’s over Laurie.”

An ache ran through his heart when he heard Laurie give way to a sob.

There was a time when your tears would have crushed me…

”I’m sorry.” He whispered again, before opening the door, and leaving.


”I-I can’t believe you actually did it? You actually…left her?” Darren stared at Jamie as he sat with him, placing a cup of coffee in front of him.

Jamie had his head in his hands, until Darren shuffled his chair closer to him and wrapped an arm around his shoulders.

Jamie looked up into Darren eyes, the beauty of their dark colour lifting a weight off his heart.

”I’ve done the right thing though. Despite how complicated the next few weeks will be, it’s worth it. I’ll probably need to move out, I doubt Laurie will. And Laurie will probably have countless questions for me, and no doubt there’s a few more arguments to be had.” Jamie said quietly, losing himself in Darren’s presence. You’re so amazingI can’t believe how good it feels to have you touching me like this.

”You make me feel so alive Darren, more so than I’ve ever felt in my entire life. Regardless of how messy things get with Laurie and me Darren, it’ll be worth it if I still have you at the end of it.” 

”Oh Jamie.” Darren uttered softly, offering Jamie a warm smile. “Of course you’ll still have me.”

As they continued to stare at one another lovingly, Darren slowly leaned in to kiss Jamie. The second their lips met an explosion of energy fired into Jamie, his heart pounding vigorously and heat flooding into his body.

Oh God Darren, I think I’m falling in love with you…


~The End~

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  1. I`m glad to see the two guys ending up together.

  2. Oh wow I LOVED it!! glad they got together too LOL